We can see the grammar and structure in your speech is 。.
Obviously you have a stronger ability of pronunciation than the other contestants but you 。..
Next time ,I think you should become more confident and passionate.
Wow,such a wonderful show..we mentioned that you were very。just now。so 。..
It's terrific to see you dress formally and well prepared for the speech, and your poster is well done as well.
however, you need to make more eye contact with the audience and better speak with various tones and clear pronunciation. I have to say you are a bit stiff without proper body language, which is no good for impressing the audience and the jury. Moreover, I really hope you can put more passion into the speech and try to enrich it with more facial expression, then surely your speech would be fabulous.
演讲中没有语法错误,尤其其中一个男孩讲的非常好,他演讲的开头很好,而且很幽默,演讲有激情,并且和观众有很好的眼神交流并且在演讲中有适当的肢体语言
your grammar is ok. It's worth mentioning that a boy gave a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning, furthermore, he was fairly humorous and enthusiastic throughout the speech, and he made good eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in the speech.
可以了吧 适当再加分吧 很辛苦的
一、语言能力及应用 1、语音、语调标准,口齿清楚,语句流畅,用词正确,无明显语法错误,显示较强的语言功底 二、演讲内容 1、演讲内容有较强的思想性、逻辑性和感染力,层次分明,引人入胜,回答问题机智巧妙满 三、演讲技巧(2分) 1、善于运用脸部表情,手势和姿势,目光接触与身体语言动用得当,语调抑扬顿挫,富于变化。
有熟练的演讲技巧能吸引观众,有较强的艺术感染力满2分 四、时间控制 五、整体形象 1、举止大方得体,自信,情绪饱满,有感情与气势,仪表端正,气质好。
其实如果你只想要应付的话 你就可是说
Your speech is great, but is still a lack of self-confidence.
你的演讲很棒,但还是缺乏自信
You sound good, but not enough solid basic skills.
你的声音不错,但是基本功不够扎实。
Your language is very fluent, but speech is not enough deep understanding of the content
你的语言很流畅,但对于演讲内容的理解还不够深刻。
The language of your organization, the voices are very good, also very confident, I really like
你的语言组织,声音都很不错,也很有自信,我很喜欢
一般后面可以加一句
I hope you continue to work
希望你继续努力
或者
I look forward to your next performance
我期待你下一次的表现