This history of the great man is for the world but most of us are common civilians.Our history cannot be compared with the great man.But we can make our own.It is our life,our history,our precious daily experience that would never be forgotten by those we love and love us.I admit that the beauty of the roaring river but I appreciate the quiet little happiness of a clear stream.And the destination of these two both flows to the ocean.Everyone has his river.The most valuable thing is not how long or how wide it is but the picture along the way.有感而写~好好改改~。
you impressed us as responsible,kind,active,and sweet teacher,my kid likes your lesson a lot,hope you enjoy your work and life in China,thanks for your help.
作文评语的写法一般要从学生习作的中心、选材、结构、表达、语言以及书写上作出中肯的评价。
1.中心:有没有离题,按照题目要求来写。
2.选材:①是否围绕中心。②是否真实,符合生活实际。③是否新鲜有趣。
3.结构:①层次段落是否清楚。②过渡是否自然。③开头和结尾是否照应。
4.表达:①记叙文有没有把事情讲清楚,写完整。写景文有没有把参观游览顺序写清楚。②详略得当,重要的人和事情详细写,不重要的地方简单写
5.语言:①句子是否通顺、准确,病句少。②有没有运用比喻、排比、拟人、夸张等手法。③有没有运用成语、俗语、谚语、名人名言、诗歌等优美词句.④标点符号运用是否恰当。
6.书写:①字体是否工整,错别字少。②卷面是否整洁干净,涂抹少
依式行文,文笔素朴,结构严谨.Formational style of writing and strict in structure.内容丰富,结构严谨,体系完备,博大精深rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning,简洁流畅,层次井然,结构严谨,文字生动,颇富幽默,笔调轻松Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful。
Hello,everyone.My name is ***(你的名字),I'm *(你的年纪) years old.I study in ***(你的学校名) Primary School.I'm in Grade*(你的年级) Class*(你的班级). I'm going to be a junior high school student, i feel very happy.
I like football and English very much,and i often play football with my classmates after schoo.(这段可以改成你喜欢的东西)My English teacher is ***(你英语老师的名字),she/he(女的选she,男的选he) is very nice to us,I like her/him(女的选her,男的选him) a lot.
There are three members in my family:my father,my mother and I.Both of parents love me and I love them too.
That's all,thank you!
这里说的及时应有两个意义:(l)对学生的作业及时反馈。
首先,学生在家里独立做作业,他们的学习节奏、学习方式也许各不相同,这样,教师的及时反馈就显得很重要。也就是说教师如尽早地批改学生的作业,就能及时了解学生的学习进步状况及学习效果,以便掌握情况进行指导。
其次,学生在做作业时,会遇到这样那样一些特殊的问题和想法,他们在急切地盼望着老师的评价和指导,所以,教师应急学生之所急,及时地给予恰当的评价。(2)及时地应用学生新近学到的一些语法知识和词汇来写评语。
这样做有助于学生对新知识加深理解和强化记忆,最起码也可以让学生看到一次知识运用的实例。例如: ·you are great .i'mproud of you. ·you've made fabulous progress and i do not doubt that you'll succeed. ·wonderful! i appreciate what you have done in your exercise-book and believe you'll be successful in your english study. · i'll be glad to see that you will do your homework better next time. ·this is the best i've seen today. · the harder you work, the sooner you'll improve. 希望王高博能满意。
I am optimistic and confident. sometimes i prefer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but i am not lonely, i like to chat with my classmates, almost talk everything ,my favorite pastime is valleyball,playing cards or surf online. through college life,i learn how to balance between study and entertainment.I feel that my strongest asset is my ability to stick to things to get them done. I feel a real sense of accomplishment when I finish a job and it turns out just as I'd planned。
Hello, allow me to make a simple self-introduction。
My name is XX, this 19-year-old, from Wuhan in Hubei Province。 I studied e-commerce and web site development professional, to engage in web site design, Internet marketing, sales, business, computer operations related to the work of six months work experience。
I am optimistic character, cheerful, self-motivated, aggressive, serious and responsible work, able to adapt to the needs of the work。
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