对学生的作文进行批改,是作文教学的重要组成部分.但长期以来,作文批改存在着劳而少功的现象.教师辛辛苦苦的批改,学生却对教师的作文评语要么看不懂,要么不想看,不爱看.我在习作评改中针对这些弊端,对习作评语进行了改革,并获得了较好的效果.一、尊重学生的愿意,鼓励学生的点滴进步.据有关资料表明,一个人如果缺发鼓励,他的潜能就不可能很好地发挥出来,我在评改学生的作文时,努力发现并抓住学生作文中哪怕是极其 微小的闪光点,给予及时鼓励,使之获得前进的动力.记得有一次 ,我给一位学生下了这样的评语:“同学,我读了你的作文,觉得你的习作态度值得我欣赏,希望你更加努力,老师相信你是最棒的!”从此之后这位同学更加认真地写作,特别是写后一丝不苟地进行删改的习惯更令人赞赏,他的习作水平也提高得很快,对于平时习作水平一般的学生,我会抓住他们习作中的闪光点进行鼓励,他们体验到成功的乐趣.例如:“你真行,这个句子写得特别好!你这几个词用得太妙了!”我还经常采用图文并茂的方式给学生下一些鼓励性的评比,笑脸、五角星、红旗,大大的苹果……,学生读到这样的评语,喜欢得不得了,体验到了成功的快乐,使之成为自己习作的动力.二、生生互评,促进自主.在作文评改中,我不仅努力优化自己的评语,而且鼓励学生自己给自己的习作写评语,自己给其他同学写评语,让学生们在用心读一读自己的习作和别人的习作,夸一夸闪光点,找一找不足点,给别人提提建议,写一写评语的实践活动中,发挥学生的自主能力,提高习作的积极性.如在写完《我的发现后》,瞿丹在自己的习作后写到:“我的发现很奇特,希望老师和同学们能欣赏我的发现.”学习小组组长看了后写到:“丹丹,你真能干,居然有这么重大的发现,老师和同学们会很欣赏的!”.三、从学生实际出发,讲究习作评语的实效性.教师要针对每次习作的具体情况给学生习作写评语,评语应有侧重点,面对同样的习作,每个学生的习作情况不相同.因此,我们要洞察学生习作的细微之处,因文而写评语,发挥评语的实效性.如同样是句子不通顺,一位学生是因为漏写了标点符号,而另一位同学是因为用语不当,还有一位是因为态度马虎,写了半句话,我分别为他们写上了这样的评语:①读一读我画“——”的句子,想想哪儿该停顿,能试着加恰当的标点符号使句子通顺吗?②小明能穿一件黄色的上衣,也能穿一顶红色的帽子吗?你能把这句话改通顺吗?③你习作中的这句话老师读了几遍,怎么也不知下半句,小马虎,你把它藏到哪儿去了?能把它找回来让老师品读吗?因为评语亲切具体,学生读后心服口服,针对老师提出的问题进行了认真的修改,评语起到了立竿见影的效果.老师评改学生的习作,在发现问题之时能进行巧妙地批评,化否定为建议,化要求为商量,化指责为引导,则 更能引发学生提思考,激发学生的习作愿望,使他们习作进步更大.。
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