you impressed us as responsible,kind,active,and sweet teacher,my kid likes your lesson a lot,hope you enjoy your work and life in China,thanks for your help.
作文评语的写法一般要从学生习作的中心、选材、结构、表达、语言以及书写上作出中肯的评价。
1.中心:有没有离题,按照题目要求来写。
2.选材:①是否围绕中心。②是否真实,符合生活实际。③是否新鲜有趣。
3.结构:①层次段落是否清楚。②过渡是否自然。③开头和结尾是否照应。
4.表达:①记叙文有没有把事情讲清楚,写完整。写景文有没有把参观游览顺序写清楚。②详略得当,重要的人和事情详细写,不重要的地方简单写
5.语言:①句子是否通顺、准确,病句少。②有没有运用比喻、排比、拟人、夸张等手法。③有没有运用成语、俗语、谚语、名人名言、诗歌等优美词句.④标点符号运用是否恰当。
6.书写:①字体是否工整,错别字少。②卷面是否整洁干净,涂抹少
2010 will be end ,and 2011will be come .In the new year ,we must be have much wishes ,because new year means that things end and another things start.So we need to make a new year"s resolution in order to the second year will be better.I want to share my new year"s resolution with you. Firstly,i decide to try my best to learn english .because my english so poor that it affects my other subject.I willface many differences ,such as broadening my vocabulary, training my listening ,improving my write and so on. I must work hard because i don"t want to behind the times. Secondly ,i will give up watching football games because every time it takes me two hours ,which makes me not finish my homework .As a student ,study is our duty ,so i wii focused more on study and less on playing . In order to my future ,i will work hard! 2010年将结束,2011即将到了。
在新的一年,我们必须有很多的愿望,因为新的一年意味着事情结束和另一个东西开始.所以我们需要作出新的一年“的计划,以便在第二个今年将是更好的新年与你分享。首先,我决定尽我所能地学习英语。
因为我的英语很差,它会影响我的其他的科目.都有不小的差距,如扩大我的词汇,我的听力训练,提高我的写作等。我必须努力工作,因为我不想落后于时代。
其次,我会放弃,因为每看一次我花了两个小时,这使我无法完成我的作业足球比赛作为一个学生。,学习是我们的职责,所以我的将会更注重学习和玩少一点。
为了我的将来,我会努力的! 请采纳!(中英兼有)。
In my school, our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after final exam. And then I have to bring it to my parents. Our head teacher will put our scores of mid-term exam and final exam on it. And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct. In order to have a good winter holiday, I have to make my parents happy. So I always try my best to earn a good evaluation from my head teacher. In front of him, I am always a good boy. So, I always have a nice remark.。
Teachers' RemarksIn my school, our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after final exam. And then I have to bring it to my parents. Our head teacher will put our scores of mid-term exam and final exam on it. And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct. In order to have a good winter holiday, I have to make my parents happy. So I always try my best to earn a good evaluation from my head teacher. In front of him, I am always a good boy. So, I always have a nice remark。
这里说的及时应有两个意义:(l)对学生的作业及时反馈。首先,学生在家里独立做作业,他们的学习节奏、学习方式也许各不相同,这样,教师的及时反馈就显得很重要。也就是说教师如尽早地批改学生的作业,就能及时了解学生的学习进步状况及学习效果,以便掌握情况进行指导。其次,学生在做作业时,会遇到这样那样一些特殊的问题和想法,他们在急切地盼望着老师的评价和指导,所以,教师应急学生之所急,及时地给予恰当的评价。(2)及时地应用学生新近学到的一些语法知识和词汇来写评语。这样做有助于学生对新知识加深理解和强化记忆,最起码也可以让学生看到一次知识运用的实例。例如:
·you are great .i'mproud of you.
·you've made fabulous progress and i do not doubt that
you'll succeed.
·wonderful! i appreciate what you have done in your
exercise-book and believe you'll be successful in your
english study.
· i'll be glad to see that you will do your homework better
next time.
·this is the best i've seen today.
· the harder you work, the sooner you'll improve.
希望王高博能满意
小学生英语卷家长英语评语
1.Well done! 干得好!
2.Keep studying hard! 继续努力!
3.Good job! 好好干!
4.Make persistent efforts though defeated.初败不馁,再接再励。
5.Keep trying.继续努力。
6.written in a clear hand 字迹清楚
7.active speaking 积极发言
I suggest our school to improve the level of canteen. Sometimes, I can find hair,iron wire even small insects in my rice.
I wish our school can build more sports installation because the sports installation that we already have are too small and limited. They are not adequate enough to have a capacity of most of us. When we have P.E lessons, some of students have to sit and watch others to play.
I think we need more psychological education since the students nowadays are suffering more and more pressure from parents, teachers, society or even ourselves. The society is full of competition. Everyone tries their best to fight. Some students don't have good psychological diathesis. Maybe their parents are so busy that ignore them. They can't tolerate the pressure. Therefore, they commit suicide. I often see these kind of tragedies on the newspaper. I think psychological education is necessary and important. Thus, we can survive.
I wish my little suggestions will be helpful.