建议
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被动不合适)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有两个谓语动词,there be 和主系表结果冲突。可改为A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名词放feel后不合适)
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